This was very interesting to read. it's refreshing to read a poem written in a style like this. this is very creative, and i loved it. excellent job.

Ohemgee it was totally wonderful! i loved itt!

great job and i really like this paragraph here:

A poem's just a poem
A rhyme is just a rhyme
A dark is just the dark
The clock just ticks away time

Crap...what happened...??

Wow, that was amazing...really emotionl...i likd it...gr8 job...5/5