Wow!
:(
that made me sad
but it was good!

Nice poem!
5/5

Wow tiff..this is a great poem...for when my day come and i reach darkness..and if i should pass before you..please read this at my funeral....

Wow this was a very mesmerizing poem. quite powerful and very pure. i loved this. i can see your not scared to write about your most inner thoughts and feelings, that's a beautiful thing.

I know it hurts but you need to be strong
strong for me so I can have my wings.

i loved those lines the most. they were very meaniful and sweet. all and all this was a fantastic piece. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.