Comments : I'd Catch You A Star Baby...

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    That was so lovely and tender..I could feel how much u r in love wz her through ur words...and the stanza that I liked the most in ur poem was

    i wanna treat you like a princess
    catch you when you fall
    but most of all baby
    i want you to be my all...

    good job..keep it up5/5...and wish u two to be together forever..