by Lori Jun 12, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
As I play my guitar |
Wow its really good i love the beggning |
I wasn't feeling this one, I'm not sure why. It seemed fine, but I had trouble focusing and staying with it. The flow was a little rocky, and rhyming seemed a little forced. It was just okay, but I know you're capable of so much more. :) |
by HvN
People like this... ugh, why can't everyone accept everybody for who they are you know? |
VERY GOOD POEM I'M SURE ALOT OF PEOPLE CAN RELATE TO IT AND IT WAS FULL OF EMOTION GREAT JOB! |
I think everyone can relate to this in some way, just like everyone can relate in a different way, but be connected through this piece. |