Wow, this a truelly profound poem, a little depressing, but well written

Hey this very touching...
Good write..

keep writing..

Wow great poem! very well written and interesting. i loved it :)

I like it caught ma attention from da start keep it up

I gave u a 5 sweetheart ur poem is awsome i will read the rest as well and comment and vote them probly a 5 but yer thanks for my 5 and keep at it ur awsome... sorry i dont go on here much so yer

I really like this poem
and enjoyed reading it
as I'm pretty sure that everyone
has had that kind of a person
at some stage or another in their
life, so think that anyone who reads this
poem can relate in
their own personal way...
Good job,
this poem was great!!!
***Take care***

Wow, i really loved ur poem. but, you know don't care about people who don't like you because i have known some people didn't like me and i have one lots of things just to get their love, but i didn't get, so try to accept what you are and never change your self for the sake of what you called FAKE people.

This poem was very strong and emotional. It is hard for us to deal with the people that hurt us, but its important that we realize what they do to us and distance ourselves but not be cruel back. Wonderful message.
<3Raych

Its a good poem hun... keep up the work

This one was good. i liked it a lot. the dif stanza lengths actualy helped this one out cuz it is a sad/emotional poem...it enhansed the feel...in my opinion. great job. 5/5

I think everyone can relate to this in some way, just like everyone can relate in a different way, but be connected through this piece.
It was strong, and emotional. The entire piece was powerful. I love the way you say it all.
Wonderful, amazing, creative, and a little depressing.

Lexie

VERY GOOD POEM I'M SURE ALOT OF PEOPLE CAN RELATE TO IT AND IT WAS FULL OF EMOTION GREAT JOB!

People like this... ugh, why can't everyone accept everybody for who they are you know?

well good point you wrote about here, the ryme and flow was extremely well done.

5/5

keep the good work up :]

- HvN

I wasn't feeling this one, I'm not sure why. It seemed fine, but I had trouble focusing and staying with it. The flow was a little rocky, and rhyming seemed a little forced. It was just okay, but I know you're capable of so much more. :)

My honest critique: 3/5

Wow its really good i love the beggning