You love them but ur scared if thats what u call it and no matter how much u want them u push them away which is u truely wanting to be with them then the just slip through ur fingers just as you get the guts thats what happend to me lol any ways i'm rateing and the lines i like most are
This wall can break, but you'll not see
They always give up and always leave me

I realize now there's more to gain
My heartâ??s blood will fall like rain
keep the writing up
^^Sami

Wow, i love the comment, thanx.

Wow, this is a wonderful poem that meany people can relate to, including me. It's inspiring. Nice job.
Honest Luck

Wow, i can really relate to this poem, it's very touching, please keep up the good work!