by SMILEoften Jun 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The way things used to be |
by LadyPearl
The emotions in this poem are raw and powerful...which is good. Now as a poet, I want to see you morph all those emotions into images that you can touch, taste, see, or hear and let your feelings row without the rhymes and see how it comes out. |