YAY, I'm the first to comment :) wow, that was so deep. It really went straight to my heart. It couldn't have been easy writing that. well done on yet another beautiful and outstanding write!! Take care and keep looking deep, the passion and emotion you put in your poem is stunningly beautiful

Grant my friend , all that I can tell you is
I tried to smile through every tear.
After I put this one on my favorites list ,
can I borrow this to show to my son 5/5

I just had to send this one to the weekly contest , surely it will win!