I like the meaning of this poem a lot and the ending was clear on your meaning of love and being together forever. The only thing was that you repeated the word stop and dance many times. Sometimes too much of the same word can throw a reader off track and become uninterested. But overall I did like this poem. |
This is a really great poem i like it |
by madlyinlove
Wow courtney really good poem...i know just how you feel. |