Comments : Dance with me forever

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    I like the meaning of this poem a lot and the ending was clear on your meaning of love and being together forever. The only thing was that you repeated the word stop and dance many times. Sometimes too much of the same word can throw a reader off track and become uninterested. But overall I did like this poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This is a really great poem i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by madlyinlove

    Wow courtney really good poem...i know just how you feel.