After believing you

by loulou   Jun 12, 2008


Yesterday,when i was in your arms baby
Do you remember us?Do you remember me?
You said you love me,oh maybe..
You said we were meant for each other
and we will be always together..
But i know that i loved u honey,it was true
And everything was about me and you
I believed that i was in heaven too..
But now I'm sure that love is a big lie
And i will never trust a guy
After you lead me to die
Without forgetting your swear for the sky
And your promise that you'll help me to fly
like a happy bird so high..
Now,you gave me a reason to cry
After you promised to stand beside me through the years..
Hiding all my tears
by your whispers in my ears
And your wonderful smile
Giving me the chance to see it for a while..
Before leaving me in this lonely world
With nothing to say except a word
That you are the lier's "lord"
coz you were the basis of my life in that big prevaricate
which was bleeding my heart and teaching it to hate...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Loulou , kt si a great poem but if i may say my opignion , break it down to paragraphs and work more on the rhyming

    1 big block on lins make the eye run from reading it

    i hope you fix it and when you do PM me to read again

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Loulou i understand ypoi are new , just hope you make pragraph in the poem it is easier for the eye to read then a hole paragraph but the rhyming is good enough you get a 5 for effort and i hope you fix it send me a PM when you do i like to read again

  • 16 years ago

    by Milton

    I liked this. I know how it feels. they make you believe that you can trust them, and you give them everything you are. but then, they forget and you get stuck feeling like this. but the words in this had lots of meaning. I like them.the feelings look special. best thing to do is to always try to keep your mind off of it. this poem was nice. good stuff =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Wow.. I love the poem.. nd so true.... great job.. keep it up.. nd thanks for the comment!!.. ^-^

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This is a really interesting poem - i would get ride of the coz and the u and other abbreviations, and lier's is spelled liar's . . but the word prevaricate is definitely cool, and I love the middle of the poem, about swearing to the sky and hiding your tears through the years . . all in all, good job

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