This is a really interesting poem - i would get ride of the coz and the u and other abbreviations, and lier's is spelled liar's . . but the word prevaricate is definitely cool, and I love the middle of the poem, about swearing to the sky and hiding your tears through the years . . all in all, good job

Wow.. I love the poem.. nd so true.... great job.. keep it up.. nd thanks for the comment!!.. ^-^

I liked this. I know how it feels. they make you believe that you can trust them, and you give them everything you are. but then, they forget and you get stuck feeling like this. but the words in this had lots of meaning. I like them.the feelings look special. best thing to do is to always try to keep your mind off of it. this poem was nice. good stuff =)

Loulou i understand ypoi are new , just hope you make pragraph in the poem it is easier for the eye to read then a hole paragraph but the rhyming is good enough you get a 5 for effort and i hope you fix it send me a PM when you do i like to read again

Loulou , kt si a great poem but if i may say my opignion , break it down to paragraphs and work more on the rhyming

1 big block on lins make the eye run from reading it

i hope you fix it and when you do PM me to read again