by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash Jun 12, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
An arrows life |
by Wereallbladesarntwe
Great write mate, the warrior spirits there to see, we old school have got to stick together,lol,best wishes Grant p |
Grant,This one was so exceptionally well written. I always try to see what I believe the writer sees as he writes . |
by gracey grey
Lovely write Grant.Metaphors were great too.Just one correction if you don't mind.......third stanza got too many 'as'.......if you could minus that , I feel the flow would be better. |