TO YOU,
I HAVE NEVER BEEN PRINCE CHARMING.
YET,
YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN MY QUEEN.
I HAVE JUST BEEN SOME GUY YOU SPEND TIME WITH.
TIME TO TIME,
AND IN BETWEEN.
YET I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN THE ROCK,
THE GROUND BENEATH YOUR FEET.
I'VE BEEN THE WATER THAT QUENCHES YOUR THIRST,
THE BREAD THAT FEEDS YOUR NEEDS.
TO YOU,
I HAVE NEVER BEEN A MAN.
JUST WEAKNESS IN THE FLESH.
YET, YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN THE ONE,
FOR WHOM MY HEART DOES QUEST.
I HAVE WIPED AWAY YOUR TEARS,
HELPED YOU TO BELIEVE.
I HAVE SEEN WHAT YOU CANT,
WHY CANT YOU SEE ME?
SO AS YOU GO ON,
ABOUT YOUR WAY.
MY PRECIOUS CINDERELLA,
I'VE ONLY ONE THING LEFT TO SAY.
I HOPE ONE DAY,
YOU'LL BELIEVE IN ME.
THE WAY I BELIEVE IN YOU.
BUT NOTHING YOU CAN SAY OR DO,
WILL CHANGE THE WAY I FEEL.
YOU MAY NEVER COME TO ME,
BUT I WILL ALWAYS........BE IN LOVE WITH YOU
that is how i think you should have groupd your sentances together. your writing is very strong for a new writer. keep tyring.