This is an amazingly well writen piece of art I love the way u used ur worda nad the emotions in here are so real and I feel the pain and loss u have writen about for I am going throug it now and thank you for sharing this poem with all of us stay strong 5/5

Tammi,

Hey, ii REALLY LOVE THiiS ! iiT'S JUST THE WAY ii FEEL RiiGHT NOW ii DiiDN'T KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS THEM BUT YOU DiiD THE PERFECT JOB !!

Omg. i love this poem. this is one of the best poems i had read in a very long time. i loved the rhyme sceme. i really did. i loved the comparisons...they all fit together perfectly. this is very well written. great poem. good job. i hope to read more from you soon. you get a perfect 5/5 from me.