Very very shakespear nicely done

Wow. excellent poem. I loved the repition, without it I think the poem would be boring, but it definately spiced it up! the last stanza was excellent. The whole poem was great! Keep it up! 5/5

"Now I'm some pathetic poetic tragedy"
girl please. you are not a tragedy, or pathetic for that matter. this was a good poem nice job, lovely flow and emotion behind it.