Comments : Playful kitten

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is really good! I like how you wrote this, very cute!

    "A kitten frolicks around like a toddler runs"

    I just thought maybe you could make it longer, but I love what you put, I just wanted to read more by the end of it!!! Take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    I love the word choice in this poem, very cute, very nicely done :]

    5/5