Picture Perfect

by Daniel Milano   Jun 12, 2008


Its puppy love, We all have a first,
We open up to the world,
And enjoy life with it's perks.

First love is a true emotion,
We invest our heart and soul in it,
First times are always fun,
But you have to know your limit.

Love is tough to understand,
And is almost never perfect,
But stay with the one you love,
in the end it's always worth it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Toxic Perfection

    Haha i definatly liked it. =]
    the flow may not be perfect but who says it has to be??
    the ideas are what counts and you got that down. ;)
    great job! =D

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    I think this poem is really cute and alot of people will be able to appreciate it. I really loved the ending. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Your welcome lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Daniel Milano

    Thanks everyone

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I love your last line.. It was probably the best of them all I must say. It was amazing advice. Great job, and I think you really put together a nice poem here. :) 5/5.

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