With All Due Respect

by Daniel Milano   Jun 12, 2008


With All Due Respect, Mr. President,
It's quite clear and evident,
That the people don't like the direction,
In which you headed in!

They don't agree with war,
Get our troops out of there
Before we lose some more!

Yes sir, I agree,
We have to stop the terrorists,
But this isn't the way to do it,
They think by killing us that they will go to heaven,
Lets kill the guy who told them that,
And Osama because he's to blame for nine-eleven.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah Mhairi

    I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    it's a really great perspective and put across very nicely, shot!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by David Wallace

    I gave u a three on this poem because u started out strong and ended a little on the weak side man. Always try to end a poem restating the title and maybe adding a lil sarcasm. Instead of you it should be your. Relic u started off the poem stating the title and I bet that if u end it a lil differently and restate the title once more u will get higher ratings. Thanks for the message u sent me though and I truly do appreciate but I am not a professional and I learn something new everyday because I look 2 improve. Look up different type of poetry formats and look to increase your vocabulary to add a lil more versatility and flavor to your writing . Your talented but everyone has extra room for improvement......... including me!!!!

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    by Chelsea King

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  • 16 years ago

    by Smiling Angel

    Straight n simple..yet strong! Good job!!

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