Hun... this poem is cute.... but its not a good idea.... you need to wait for that guy to REALLY notice you... and if he doesnt relize you like him... play it cool and don't let him make you imbarest..... believe me.. im goin through the same thing right now

Very cute poem that relates to a lot of people who have crushes on someone. Just one thing, capitalize all of your "i"s in this poem otherwise nice work! A wonderful piece that's a joy to read. 4/5 from me, take care!