This is very good.

Some structure and some flow problems, they are obvious, if we are to judge only on that then this poem would fail...by most 'poets' standards.

I enjoyed this poem because I'm able to look past and see what was truly there. Poetry, it was a wonderful message, one that is filled with emotion and deeply thought out message.

I think that his poem is very well done. I enjoyed how much emotion was put into it, I enjoyed the work that you thought about.

I actually read one of your quotes and had to read a poem of yours. It's really quite good, I'm very glad I did now.

5/5

Yours Sincerely,
Shaun Aka Dark Savior.