WOW!!
I can honestly relive every moment
really well written
keep it up
5/5

I am not very fond of clowns ether. but, hay, thats just me. Nice write, keep up the excellent work. "Nice write from Poetry Knight"

Wow, this is an amazing poem. I know sometimes dreams could be really scarey and horrifying.
great poem.keep it up 5\5

I love this its written beautifully and symbolically great work you.

I love this its written beautifully and symbolically great work you. The idea of the adder and the sacrifice amused me the most.