Nature Weeping (Minute Poetry)

by Lonely Rider   Jun 13, 2008


Nature Weeping(Minute Poetry)

Blooming blanket of greenish hue
Soothing breeze blew
Lush forest realm
Now overwhelmed

Iron monsters demolishing
Voices screaming
Trampled flora
Fading fauna

Deserts replacing vanished green
Distubed serene
Man destroying
Nature weeping

Minute Poetry - The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables.
The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Poem about nature is not only good but also encouraging! I liked your poem for it's thoughts and the form. Very well constructed lines. Wonderful imagery and description! Very well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Though this poem is short and simple... still it is nice and great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is unique and nicely written. Enjoyed every minute reading it. The rhymes are perfectly matched to the subject and the flow is amazing. The imagary phrases are strong and bring a destructive messege: We destroy nature. Good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    RL
    You did a wonderful job on this poetry form. Great Imagery and word choices,
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsey

    Wow this was really great. I loved how it flows to a beat, almost slow then fast. I love the visual details you use and the word choices to influence your subject. I loved the point you were trying to make and you made it loud and clear. Very well done, I think.

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