by Kevin Askew Jun 13, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Waiting for the clock to tick |
by Sylvia
When the one you love is away or a far distance from you, minutes seem like hours, etc., until they return. The wait is long and hard but worth it. Well done. |
by dora
Aww your poem was so sweet. it was beautifully worded. very touching 5/5 =) |
by Josh
Nice write. In the second stanza, second line I'm not quite sure if you meant my eyes "swell" up with tears or how it is right now which is my eyes "well" up with tears. I know I come across typos in my writing countless amounts of times. |
by Jillian
Oh my goodness that is like exactly how i feel1!!! thta was such an amazing poem! |
by Sora
Nicee work with this one!! excellent job, and i love the title of this poem. keep up the good work =] |