Comments : Love At A Distance

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown

    Nice Work there!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow
    my friend, i really loved this poem
    so powerful and romantic
    this was my favorite part:
    "I know that you'll be back soon
    Though it doesnt heal the pain
    Of all the waiting I'll endure
    Until you're here with me again."

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    A beautifull poem full of emotions :) well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Very nice poem i totally loved it!!!! it was truly amazing!!! loved the flow, and the meaning but i guess i like it even more b/c i can relate lol... 5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Nicee work with this one!! excellent job, and i love the title of this poem. keep up the good work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Jillian

    Oh my goodness that is like exactly how i feel1!!! thta was such an amazing poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Josh

    Nice write. In the second stanza, second line I'm not quite sure if you meant my eyes "swell" up with tears or how it is right now which is my eyes "well" up with tears. I know I come across typos in my writing countless amounts of times.

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Aww your poem was so sweet. it was beautifully worded. very touching 5/5 =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    When the one you love is away or a far distance from you, minutes seem like hours, etc., until they return. The wait is long and hard but worth it. Well done.