by Ingrid Jun 13, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Standing still in time |
by Invited
Your work is very insiteful and true...I really like the poetic structure and device in this piece. Well done~ |
Very stunningly penned, Ingrid. I'm much for lyrics for I am known to write them also, but I haven't written one in a very long time. "Defeat", I believe, was my last song that I wrote. But I loved this. Very much. It is so true... time waits for no man, but love can. Sure it's a pressure sometimes, to know that the simplest things exist, but in a short time, they disappear... :) Love will conquer it all. I believe it. :) "Love is just a heartbreak away." Thank you for posting. It's a favorite. 5/5! |
by expressivechild
You possess such great writing talent! I love it...... |
by Rachel RTVW
^I thought all men are the same^ I think the appropriate word would be were.. |
by Cindy
Nice job on your lyrics Ingrid...sad but with a touch of hope. |