You

by xXxRaulXxx   Jun 13, 2008


You took my heart out,
And ripped it apart,
You heard my screams,
Or so it seemed

You didnt help
When I needed it most
You were'nt there
To feel my love

THis poem was honestly just things I thoughts of like my last one I made it in a matter of minutes I don't think its good though

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  • 16 years ago

    by InvisiblyHeartless

    Really innovative and quick but heart throbbing. interesting point of view here. i like minus the violence an pain.

  • 16 years ago

    by dancingwolf

    I thaught it was really good and really deep i like it

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