What I Felt On That Day

by White Chocolate Dynamite   Jun 13, 2008


I have the love of my life,
Theres many reasons that show it.
She makes me have the perfect life,
It just seems like it all fits.

I found myself waiting today,
Waiting so anxiously for that call.
This happened on a Thursday,
It proves my love for you will never fall.

When I finally got that desired call,
I found myself so happy.
Because my love for you will never fall,
And I finally didn't fell so crappy.

Going those twenty-four hours without talking to you,
Just made me break down inside.
I'm sure you felt this way too,
But I'm glad we finally found somewhere to collide.

*This poem was written from me to my girlfriend, the greatest girl in the world!!!!!!!!!!!!*

Ali,

I love you girl!!!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    Going those twenty-four hours without talking to you,
    Just made me break down inside.
    I'm sure you felt this way too,
    But I'm glad we finally found somewhere to collide.

    my favorite stanza. such a beautiful crashing ending into each other's arms. overall, great write and good flow. she'll love it, no worries. i can see how much you love her. i wish you guys love forever. take care. ciao.

  • 16 years ago

    by Spiker 03

    Hey bro!! loved this one. I remember when you were writing it. 5/5 keep it up! luv ya always~your one and only lil sis~ S_03.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Awwww.... she'll love it!! its good. esp. knowing what u went through w/out her.. lol i know how u felt. hey alteast were not loners we all know how it feels. ur a great writer Nate!! keep it up! 5/5 alwyas
    ur lil sis
    Kate~LSB23

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