Winds of change(Tanka)

by Ingrid   Jun 13, 2008


Soft whispering winds
of change come to me across
ocean and land tempt
me to search deep within thus
enabling my soul to grow

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  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    I like the usage of poetic device. It is very mesmerising and penetrating.Well done. You've got my vote!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    ^of change come to me across^

    An incomplete sentence forcing the syllable count....

    ^me to search deep within thus^

    Again, an incomplete sentence as a result of forcing the syllable count..

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this poetry form Ingrid,
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Pure simplicity, Though it makes me wonder if it is about sharing verse and self in a place such as this site.

    This is how I would comment on the pleasure and growth I enjoy daily since I first posted and It grows daily in insight and friendship. 5/5 once again

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