I have no intention in leaving this club, ever.
I think it would sound better of it was of leaving.

A honest person
It's an honest. :)

Also, your probably
You're*
Your means ownership. Your toy, my toy.
You're means you are. You're my friend. :D

I think the favorite poet line should end with a period instead.

Lol. I loved it!!!!!!! :D I smiled for the whole thing. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this. You are one of my best friends on this site. Especially lately. I seem to get best friends that leave the site after a while, IE Travis, and you haven't done that. Thank you for being there with me for the happy and sad times, I will do the same in return. :) 5/5

Im glad you found someone special like this, I have before on this site. but we dont talk anymore :/ but im glad you guys have eachother and this poem was wonderful. =]

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.