Perfection.

by Courageous Dreamer   Jun 13, 2008


Perfection,

You're one of those many people in the club,
Who I can tell anything to.

I never thought I'd meet such a sweet guy like you,
I always thought all guys were the same,
But you proved me wrong.

Your such a funny guy,
With great talent in poetry,
And many other things in life.

We've been friends on this site for such a long time,
And I hope we stay friends.

From Soul of A Poet to Between the Lines of Life,
I'll always be your Temps. :]

If you ever need to talk about anything,
You know I'm here for you.
I'll try to give you the best advice I can give,
At any point in time.

Sincerely,
Temps

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  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Aw. This is sweet. Again, it comes straight from the heart. Also, I like how you wrote it as a letter, but it still can be read as a poem. Only one small error --

    "Your such a funny guy,
    With great talent in poetry,
    And many other things in life."

    ^^ "Your" should be "You're".

    I feel as though, and not only because the person you wrote it for you call "Perfection", it was the best title for the piece, because it was perfection. Wonderful job.

    5/5

    ``Briana

  • 16 years ago

    by forevertobeart

    I like how it's just like a letter to this person, but it lacks a poetic feel. it's really cute though, so good job. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    Oh wow... Temps I am speachless... Such a wonderful thing you did for me here its really touching. Ye we have known each other for a long time here and yes you will always be my temps =). I see nothing but friendship in the future.

    If I could I would hug you in reality.. and I wish I could cause this was just such a wonderfull and thoughtfull poem.

    Thank you so much my dear Temps=)

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