Oh wow... Temps I am speachless... Such a wonderful thing you did for me here its really touching. Ye we have known each other for a long time here and yes you will always be my temps =). I see nothing but friendship in the future.

If I could I would hug you in reality.. and I wish I could cause this was just such a wonderfull and thoughtfull poem.

Thank you so much my dear Temps=)

I like how it's just like a letter to this person, but it lacks a poetic feel. it's really cute though, so good job. :)

Aw. This is sweet. Again, it comes straight from the heart. Also, I like how you wrote it as a letter, but it still can be read as a poem. Only one small error --

"Your such a funny guy,
With great talent in poetry,
And many other things in life."

^^ "Your" should be "You're".

I feel as though, and not only because the person you wrote it for you call "Perfection", it was the best title for the piece, because it was perfection. Wonderful job.

5/5

``Briana