Another good poem.. but i have to say the same thing as i said about the first one i commented. but it must be your style of writing. but for me it just threw the flow off just a little at the beginning.

but overall it was really good.

I liked this a lot. I thought there was a lot of meaning behind it. I quite liked the choice of words in the piece. My only suggestion, maybe, is to even up your lines. I feel as though it'll make it easier to read, but even still, the poem was good. 5/5

``Briana

The flow was just off, but then I always think in non-rhyme poems the flow doesn't really count for much. I loved the vocabulary, some of the words just seemed perfect in this context.
It gave me the shudders slightly, reminding me of what could be 'Hell' or spending an eternity being punished for sins.
Excellent poem, Sole x