The Little Things

by Anaisthitos   Jun 14, 2008


I love the way you laugh,
it's like music to my ears,
and I love how when you're happy,
that music's all I hear.

I love the way you can talk so fast,
it's the cutest thing I've heard,
when you're upset all your thoughts
seem to form one long word.

I love the way you sound so happy,
even when you're not,
and when you smile it's like art,
you're smile's all I could ever want.

I love the way you say 'i love you'
and I love the way you care,
I love how you forgave me,
and how you're always there.

I love the way you live your life,
just the way you want it to be,
I love the way you love everyone,
even when they make you bleed.

I hate the way you hate me,
even when I write you songs,
and give you more then you could ask,
because without you it feels so wrong.

I hate the way it's you and him,
and not you and me
I kept trying, I gave it all,
because I thought we could be.

I hate the way you left me,
and I hate the way I cry,
but most of all I hate myself,
and how I'll still love you till I die.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LIGURE

    Ow,, how sweet,,, really like your.. i enjoyed a lot.. well... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    This is a sweet poem and i can feel the emotions from it. Some lines are longer then others, and it messes up the flow a bit, but still it was a really good poem. I like the simple language, and how you didnt over think it all. One thing you could do to make the poem better is to go through and see which words are just "fillers" and arent really needed. But, anyway, it was a really good poem. 5/5

    Caitlin =)

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Very interesting read depicting your tale of lost love and affection.Written with much emotion and could be very good.
    Second stanza second line change "not" to "aren't" better rhyme. To me there are too many "and"s that could be deleted or changed to other words without altering the intent. Your flow is hurt by the number of words in some lines(a bit verbose). I might even swap the sixth and seventh stanzas.
    As always an opinion.

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