Very interesting read depicting your tale of lost love and affection.Written with much emotion and could be very good.
Second stanza second line change "not" to "aren't" better rhyme. To me there are too many "and"s that could be deleted or changed to other words without altering the intent. Your flow is hurt by the number of words in some lines(a bit verbose). I might even swap the sixth and seventh stanzas.
As always an opinion.

This is a sweet poem and i can feel the emotions from it. Some lines are longer then others, and it messes up the flow a bit, but still it was a really good poem. I like the simple language, and how you didnt over think it all. One thing you could do to make the poem better is to go through and see which words are just "fillers" and arent really needed. But, anyway, it was a really good poem. 5/5

Caitlin =)

Ow,, how sweet,,, really like your.. i enjoyed a lot.. well... 5/5