Comments : Something's not right

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow that was a deep poem. i like how u said u cried most guys cant admit that, or show that they cry, theres nothing wrong w/ that.btw love gives u alot of confused emotions.. well keep it up!! btw welcome to the site! 5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23

  • 16 years ago

    by Daniel Milano

    Pretty nice man

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    Again, i love this poem, and i can relate to this one. You have a really good talent so don't ignore it!!
    another 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    I love it!
    great job =]

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    Very well put, I have a poem that's similar to this, and I understand. So beautiful with much emotion, great job 5/5.

    -mandy :)