Good job...I liked the poem
P.S
Because they're words I'll never speak...I think U mean( there 're)..
You're parents reinforce your lies ( your)..

Keep up the good work and wish u good luck:)..

I loved this. i can totally relate to it. it's amazing how we can get so many emotions out through peotry and you did just that. wonderful job!

-Ashlei.

I loved this one too-coupla typos but nothing major.
Some of the lines were so strong and make us feel the emotions you're writing about.
Well done.
Aish
xx

Just for the record.. i did mean they're.. "they are words i'll never speak" ..meaning what was writting before that line is what i will never speak.. eh..

thanks.