The New Meaning Of Me

by ABake   Jun 14, 2008


Bring on the rain and bring on the tears; sometimes I wish he knew about the battle I have fought. If he did, that might be a reason for him to realize just how weak I am-- I can walk away without a word but a million dollars will not stop the tears that fall from my distant eyes; The end of another day has come and gone away [I want desperately to hide from the world]

My whole body aches with sadness as I lay here trying to fall asleep; But baby remember, you're the only thing on my mind; And thinking of you causes my heart to beat extremely fast and then I, well I just can't fall asleep; Do you happen to have a diagnosis for this strange illness I seem to be suffering from? In my mind and in my dreams you smile and say yes as you sweep me off of my tired feet--

For anyone who knows me, they know I am indeed a dreamer. [I have found a new word for myself: Pathetic] So honey, bring on your storm;Actually, give me all you have got up that ironed Abercrombie sleeve of yours. [Yeah, I know I can't handle it] You are about to break me into 3 millions pieces and the [pathetic] thing is I want you to...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Another amazing write! You are just blowing me away. I don't really usually like prose poetry because it doesn't have a flow or anything with it, but it still works out just as good as when a poem does have a flow, IMO. This poem was very well expressed and true emotions shined again. :] Hmm, I'm just making a request; I think that you should try writing a poem that has a flow and a rhyme possibly? I'd be interested to see what you come up with. Anyways, this poem was definatly 5/5. Flawless.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was so deep. so pure and loving, yet sad. it was beautiful. a lovely thing to write about. you did a great job at expressing yourself. the emotions you expressed made it worth reading. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Thinh Nguyen

    I agree with muhammad =]
    my poems dont need corections.
    is that right my strawberry muffin. =]
    i love you

  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Hi,
    I have read your peoms,they are GREATTT...i am impressed,I will be greatly honoured,if you comment on my poems,atleast mark corrections,or give some suggestions,please,your words will be of great importance to me,
    Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Hi,
    I have read your peoms,they are GREATTT...i am impressed,I will be greatly honoured,if you comment on my poems,atleast mark corrections,or give some suggestions,please,your words will be of great importance to me,
    Thanks

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