by Christina Hobbs Jun 14, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I have given you my heart, |
by Josh
Hey I am liking your poem but not quite loving it. It has major potential; it doesn't flow in a swift rhythm. But great idea and overall a nice write. |
by bekka
Wow that's great keep up the good work |
I love that poem. good job. |
Very very sweet |
by grace
I like this poem even more than the other. it's very cute and really captures the emotions and reality of falling in love and loving someone else so much! keep writting! |