Place I call home

by SeGrAdA   Jun 14, 2008


I drove under the stars 1 night,
leading my way the moonlight.
I longed for this place I call home,
in the middle of nowhere,where's calm.

It was a long ride,but i took my time,
enjoyed the silence & its gloomy rhyme.
No 1 could stop me, i knew for sure.
I left my past,every thought that wasn't pure.

For the first time i was free,
I dropped a tear but felt no fear,
said goodbye to a world so dear,
& joined this darkness for an eternal sleep.

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Excellent write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Ok, I did give it a five/five.

    I reviewed it, I found the poem to be very unoriginal due to the fact that this poem is a lot of what happens on this site. It is teenage angst poem.

    I did like the rythme and how you were able to let it go into each verse. It did have some flow problems it kinda took away from the poem.

    I've reviewed your other work and found this one to be a little less than the others. I still found it enjoyable don't get me wrong.

    I just felt that the Angst was not your style, I felt that you were out of your element in this type of poetry.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Wow!!..deep feelings i felt..its nice 2 find peace and quite..soft poem..i liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is great and the rhyming flow is excellent great job
    =]
    I really like this poem

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