Comments : Place I call home

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is great and the rhyming flow is excellent great job
    =]
    I really like this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Wow!!..deep feelings i felt..its nice 2 find peace and quite..soft poem..i liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Ok, I did give it a five/five.

    I reviewed it, I found the poem to be very unoriginal due to the fact that this poem is a lot of what happens on this site. It is teenage angst poem.

    I did like the rythme and how you were able to let it go into each verse. It did have some flow problems it kinda took away from the poem.

    I've reviewed your other work and found this one to be a little less than the others. I still found it enjoyable don't get me wrong.

    I just felt that the Angst was not your style, I felt that you were out of your element in this type of poetry.

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Excellent write 5/5