by Crystal Jun 14, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I can't go a day without talking to you |
by LoreNz0
I think for a first poem this is very good. i felt the same about my first poem, if u dont like parts of it try goin back to it later and changin/improving it a lil. thats wht i do with loads of mine. very good start tho =) |