by fake smiles and lost promises Jun 14, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
There once was a girl with no eyes, |
I love the rhyming at the beginning/ middle of this poem. I like how you portray the shock and the newness of getting back things so common to the majory of people. You show a more negative view, which, I think, people in those circumstances probably wouldn't think like that... maybe, maybe not, who knows. |