Comments : Blind, death, numb

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    I love the rhyming at the beginning/ middle of this poem. I like how you portray the shock and the newness of getting back things so common to the majory of people. You show a more negative view, which, I think, people in those circumstances probably wouldn't think like that... maybe, maybe not, who knows.

    I like this. Well done
    5/5
    ~FountainsOfBlood