Not bad for a first poem needs alittle work in the flow of it but over all definatly not bad and keep it up!

It was good. Just the format of the poem was kind of weird. You have got a nice start here, however.. So keep up the great work. You'll improve so much on this site with your poetry. :] 5/5 .. Nice start.

It is clear that you have a unique still of writing. This poem was a very interesting read. You seem to have a special way of masking the direct subject in a poem. This is not a bad thing, I think it is great because it allows someone like me to think. I hope to see more poems from you here. Nice work.

I like it a lot. The style is very orginal. Very deep thoughts delivered in a poetic self image
well done

Mysterious...I can tell...but very vague....I understand it tho and thats good...great write for a first!!!

I like it, but it seems like you can put more feeling into give it more of a zing that makes me feel the true feelings behinde it. I would say try thinking really deep in to experinces or even using some new words can help convey the feelings more. but besides that good job XD

Ooh, I enjoy this. short, and nonpareil in my opinion. [: packs a punch. wonderfully penned, Chyna. however the punctuation on the last couplet read a little odd for me. The whole thing sounds like a question to me, rather than just the first line. What about:

"why bother with something new,
when this disguise will do?"

=J
Keep it coming!

Yupp yupp this is very good 5/5