by Michael D Nalley Jun 14, 2008
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Who am I ? He said I am what I am, |
by H. Elizabeth
Definately one of my very favorites. You are who you are, not what people want you to be. You are what God created. |
by Blissful
Very deep and powerful write you have here. You spoke of these others are scared to express and you depicted it beautifully. Well done *5/5* |
I loved the first two lines. Set the mood for the rest of the write. Who does really know who they are deep down? Very easily related to, because everyones gone through that questioning. Excellent read 5/5 |
You have style and a command of words that scream "POET". Nice work. |
by Empathy
I very much liked reading this poem. The use of the question "Who am I?" works great because the poem is constantly kind of questioning you to know... which I thought was very neat. I like how within the last stanzas you come across in a little bit stronger tone then in the first. Overall you did very well this and I thought it was a great read. Nice work! |