Comments : Who Am I ?

  • 16 years ago

    by yblehs

    Who are you you ask? A SUPER DUPER WRITER!!!

    i love these lines
    "Who am I ? He said I am what I am,
    Strong as a lion, gentle as a lamb."

    simply lovely

  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    I very much liked reading this poem. The use of the question "Who am I?" works great because the poem is constantly kind of questioning you to know... which I thought was very neat. I like how within the last stanzas you come across in a little bit stronger tone then in the first. Overall you did very well this and I thought it was a great read. Nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    You have style and a command of words that scream "POET". Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony Duvalle

    I loved the first two lines. Set the mood for the rest of the write. Who does really know who they are deep down? Very easily related to, because everyones gone through that questioning. Excellent read 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Very deep and powerful write you have here. You spoke of these others are scared to express and you depicted it beautifully. Well done *5/5*

  • 13 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Definately one of my very favorites. You are who you are, not what people want you to be. You are what God created.

    5/5

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