I Do

by Michael D Nalley   Jun 15, 2008


Remember when we said I do?
Did we know what we would go through?
No altar in front, behind us no pew
Yet, I swore before God I would love you

Could words do it, or were the best words taken
Vows are made with words if I am not mistaken
Did we have joy, did we have fun?
Did we have our seasons in the sun?

When we said I do was it His will?
Or was it love we would latter kill
Will we clothe our nakedness before God?
Do you think the Lord sees our facade?

Some say I do, while others say I will
The dust of our past is settling still
Is it possible that our words became undone?
Or were we ever meant to live our lives as one?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nanita

    Short yet sweet and to the point. Questions that may only be answered by two people.

    Very good (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony Duvalle

    Very good. Shows how people can jump into things before they know what it's all about. I liked when you said "vows are made with words" that sent a very strong message to me. Flow for me though was a little shaky. But still a solid 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CourtneyyContageous

    Wow. that's so deep. That's kind of how i'm feeling right now, and I couldn't have put it better myself.

  • 16 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    Great poem Michael. I can totally relate. See my poem "Disorder in the Court". You have a great command of rhyme,message and flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by yblehs

    DAng i'm jealous of you
    you have such a talent there!
    you make the words go together very well
    and not put on...I'm sure even thought
    this is about "I dos" a lot of people can
    relate to a commitment big or small like that!
    you have made me wanna read more of you poems

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