I think it's very nice it had a very nice rhyme scheme that kept me interested also the starting with questions like pulled me in it made me want to read it more =]

Aw, I'm getting married in a few years. This poem is really interesting. As I was reading it, I could tell that you loved your spouse, but still felt like there might me something missing or that there was some sort of doubt in your marriage. (Sorry, if that's the complete opposite!! lol My brain is funny sometimes.)

I definitely enjoyed reading this poem. Your rhyme, and word choice went very well with the poem, the thoughts that you provided for it were very thought provoking, and interesting. Overall it was a great read. Great work!

It had almost perfect rhymes and flow.

"Will we clothe our nakedness before God?
Do you think the Lord sees our facade?"

^really nice lines right there.

i sense the deep love you have for this person, and yet there is the feeling of your love just slipping away. i wouldn't really understand that, but i do understand that it's a sad feeling. really nice write.

DAng i'm jealous of you
you have such a talent there!
you make the words go together very well
and not put on...I'm sure even thought
this is about "I dos" a lot of people can
relate to a commitment big or small like that!
you have made me wanna read more of you poems

Great poem Michael. I can totally relate. See my poem "Disorder in the Court". You have a great command of rhyme,message and flow.

Wow. that's so deep. That's kind of how i'm feeling right now, and I couldn't have put it better myself.

Very good. Shows how people can jump into things before they know what it's all about. I liked when you said "vows are made with words" that sent a very strong message to me. Flow for me though was a little shaky. But still a solid 4/5

Short yet sweet and to the point. Questions that may only be answered by two people.

Very good (: