Love At First Sight

Indeed, this poem was filled with great imagery. Everyone who reads it can set a picture in their minds, I like. And I think yeah, how could you ever forget that moment? I doubt it.

Whatever others may say, but I wanna be honest. I loved this poem. Its such a beautifully scripted love poem. The best part is that I can visualise the whole thing in my mind... The college... The geology lecture... She sitting near you... She giving your number... Amazing. Dude, I know that in writing poems I m your junior but you really won my heart... Take care. Lovely... Definately 5.

I actually didn't like it as much as I do your other works that I've read in the past ... and it saddens me. I like that you write about this cliche topic differently from others -- and it brings a certain charm, but your poetry format just really bugs me. How you start your second stanza with an extremely long sentence. But it was a sweet, cute, fun-loving piece.
Just not your greatest.
..__MiNDYY

This is a very sweet and simplistic poem, and I must say that I enjoyed the read. You stay consistent and your message is lovingly true. Many people could relate to these emotions I am sure. Overall I would say you did very well with this. Nice work.

Well you did it again only as you could do well done