Comments : Xforget the times he.....x

  • 16 years ago

    by rebeccasarah

    I love it, I love it, I love it.
    Its amazing.
    The way where you start the first three phrases with "forget" but the last, "remember" is very ..poetic? is that the word? I feel like I have that thing, they call "commenters block". haha.
    Anyways, I really like the rhyming, it adds a very cute touch, to such a sad poem.
    Keep up the good work,
    becca.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fiona

    Thank you becca:)

  • 15 years ago

    by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs

    This is realllllly cute and your a great writer
    but i kno i read some of the parts somewhere else?